This book is so horribly written that at times I couldn’t understand what was going on. I had to read the dialogue aloud so that I could make heads or tails of it. Never mind that the story reads like a Nicholas Sparks novel on crack – I could almost get past that part – but the grammar issues made my head hurt. I’m surprised Bill Shakespeare hasn’t risen from his grave and smashed this “author’s” computer.
Sandi Lynn is working on her second novel. I know some third-graders who need to practice their editing skills. Maybe I should hook them up. Read more here…
Cannonball Read V 